This is the first villanelle I have attempted since 2006–the year in which I began an 8 year break from writing poetry. I am not sure if it is any good, but I am certain that it is a villanelle:)
Although his thoughts would make a person freeze,
He often rants about the Justice scales.
…he’s not alone in having this disease.
He’s known to translate “smoke” as “foggy breeze”—
To choose the proper phrase he rarely fails,
Although his thoughts could make a person freeze.
A flashing dollar sign is all he sees
When shown his admen’s stylish faerie tales
He’s not alone in having this disease.
His corporation gives to charities
A nominal percentage of its sales,
Although his thoughts could make a person freeze.
The people whose support’s obtained with ease
By one who speaks of Christ, the Cross, and nails
Are not alone in having this disease.
Though spending Sundays praying on his knees,
His acts would land some poorer men in jails.
This gloomy thought could make a person freeze:
He’s not alone in having this disease.
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