[Narcissus–painted by Carvaggio]
“Narcissus”
As I gazed in a pond by a tree,
I was met by a copy of me
Who could mimic my talk
And the way that I walk.
He was fine as a fellow can be.
a limerick by Paul Burgess
[Narcissus–painted by Carvaggio]
“Narcissus”
As I gazed in a pond by a tree,
I was met by a copy of me
Who could mimic my talk
And the way that I walk.
He was fine as a fellow can be.
a limerick by Paul Burgess
I am really getting to appreciate limerick’s. Very nice.
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Thank you! I am glad that you enjoy them. They are certainly fun to write:)
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Very clever – it fit with the vanity of the character and the setting. It was fun 🙂
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Thank you! I keep revising this one because I think it has potential to be light without being nonsensical. As always, I appreciate your insightful feedback:)
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